一、高分副词(有些单词在中文中意思差不多，在英文中还是有差异的，请同学们多查看英语解释和常用搭配。)
1. 犹豫不决地hesitantly 14. 忠诚地；一心一意地devotedly 2. 不耐烦地impatiently
15. 赞美地；钦佩地admiringly
3. 无怜悯地；残忍地mercilessly /cruelly 16. 失望地disappointedly 4. 闷闷不乐地moodily；unhappily 17. 高兴地delightedly
5. 虚弱地；微弱地weakly 18. 感兴趣地 interestedly 6. 生气地angrily
19. 满意地 contentedly
7. 害怕地；恐惧地(run away/scream) fearfully 20. 匆忙地 hurriedly 8. 羡慕地；嫉妒地enviously 21. 疲倦地tiredly/ wearily
9. 焦虑地、不安地、担忧地anxiously
22. 天真地innocently 10. 有力地；坚定地firmly 23. 安全地safely
11. 担忧地；着急地worriedly 24. 坚定地；坚决地determinedly 12. 出乎意料地；意外地unexpectedly 25. 钟爱地；深情地 lovingly 13. 困惑地confusedly
二、高分副词运用
1. She glanced ____________（害怕地）over her shoulder.
【答案】fearfully
2. His friends teased him ____________（无情地）when they found the poem.
【答案】mercilessly
3. Hearing the reply, he smiled ____________（满意地）.
【答案】contentedly
4. \"I'm sorry,\" she said, smiling ____________（微弱地）.
【答案】weakly
5. He ____________（匆忙地）went to school, running all the way.
【答案】hurriedly
6. She was staring ____________（闷闷不乐地）into the fire.
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【答案】moodily/unhappily
7. He signed his name ____________（犹豫不决地）.
【答案】hesitantly
8. We sat waiting ____________（不耐烦地）for the film to start.
【答案】impatiently
9. He closed his eyes ____________（疲倦地）.
【答案】wearily/tiredly
10. “I will give up smoking,” he said ____________（坚定地）.
【答案】determinedly/firmly
11. She smiled at him ____________（深情地）.
【答案】lovingly
12. He looked at his friend's new car ____________（羡慕地）.
【答案】enviously/admiringly
13. She waited ____________（焦急地）by the phone.
【答案】anxiously/worriedly
14. She left the gambling table ____________（失望地）.
【答案】disappointedly
15. His father died ____________（意外地）.
【答案】unexpectedly
16. The two friends shook hands ____________（有力地）.
【答案】firmly
17. ____________（高兴地）, she accepted the invitation.
【答案】Delightedly
18. He served his master ____________（忠诚地）.
【答案】devotedly
19. “What has happened?” He asked ____________（困惑地）.
【答案】confusedly
20. “Who will win the game?” He asked ____________（饶有兴趣地）.
【答案】interestedly
21. `I wonder what to do,' she said ____________（担忧地）.
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【答案】worriedly/anxiously
22. She smiled at him _________.（天真地）
【答案】innocently
三、实战演练（2017年11月浙江高考）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A vacation with my mother
I had an interesting childhood: It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother-loving, sweet, and yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.
My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten. David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept: “ You stand outside the door and play lookout while I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh… I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t about to take any chances.
On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections.If a strange family showed up on her front doorsteps, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town. 注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
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2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1：
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us._____________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 1：
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.____________________________
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【One possible version】： Paragraph 1：
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. Mom firmly insisted
that we must make full use of it since we had brought it. David and I looked at Dad, hoping he could stop her crazy idea. To our great disappointment, he agreed. We spent a whole afternoon seeking a nicecamping place and set upour tent before the night fell. It was the first time that I had thought mom could be wise as I gazed at our stunning tent admiringly. “Oh, I forgot the pillows!” What a misconception! Despite the ache of my neck, we had some great nights. Paragraph 2：
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. The bright blue
sky, the limitless green grass, the group of sheep, the setting sun and the countless stars in the curtain of nights kept me spellbound. Not only did we see the picturesque scenery, we also managed to consider mom’s scandals as a kind of fun.I really love my Mum. To our relief, the four of us safely arrived at grandparents’ place and went back to our home. It was so fortunate to see my friends again.
【点评】：故事情节完整合理，句式结构丰富，能熟练使用倒装句、感叹句等句型。文中firmly 强调妈妈一定要使用我们带来的新帐篷。新帐篷非常漂亮，所以作者带着欣赏(admiringly)的目光看着它。safely
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与文章开头及下文形成呼应，强调我们安全到家。
专题05 高分介词短语的使用
一、高分介词短语
26. determinedly=with determination 坚定地；毅然决然地; 坚忍不拔地 27. interestedly=with interest 饶有兴趣地 28. confidently=with confidence 满怀信心地 29. patiently=with patience 耐心地 30. proudly=with pride 骄傲地；自豪地
31. enthusiastically=with enthusiasm 热心地; 热情地；感兴趣地 32. sympathetically=with sympathy 同情地 33. cautiously =with caution
小心地；谨慎地
34. enviously=with envy 嫉妒地 35. curiously=with curiosity 好奇地 36. anxiously=with anxiety 焦虑地
37. devotedly=with devotion 热爱地；忠诚地；全心全意地 38. sorrowfully=with sorrow 悲痛地；非常伤心地 39. with sadness 伤心地 40. with fear 因为害怕 41. with courage 勇敢地 42. with joy 高兴地
43. embarrassedly=with/in embarrassment 难为情地；尴尬地 44. contentedly=with/in satisfaction 满意地 45. delightedly=with/in delight 高兴地
46. excitedly=with/in excitement 激动地；兴奋地 47. disgustedly=with/in disgust 厌恶地
48. with/ in relief 如释重负地；松了口气；欣慰地 49. with/in surprise 吃惊地 50. amazedly=in amazement 吃惊地
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51. confusedly=in confusion 困惑地 52. admiringly=in admiration 仰慕地 53. silently= in silence 默默地 54. angrily=in anger 愤怒地；生气地 55. secretly=in secret 秘密地；偷偷地 56. hurriedly=in a hurry 匆忙地
57. fearfully=in fear=in (a) panic=in terror= in horror 害怕地 58. in puzzlement 困惑地 59. in shock 震惊地 二、高分介词短语运用
1. He fought the illness _________________（勇敢地） and determination.
【答案】with courage
2. They watched the experiment ____________________（非常感兴趣地）.
【答案】with great interest；with great enthusiasm 3. He answered the questions _________________（自信地）.
【答案】with confidence
4. He listened to her explanation ________________（耐心地）.
【答案】with patience
5. I wear my policeman's uniform ________________（自豪地）.
【答案】with pride
6. He went into the cave ________________（非常好奇地）.
【答案】with great curiosity
7. We waited for news ________________（焦虑地）.
【答案】with anxiety
8. We all watched ________________（尴尬地） as Mr Rogers started to cry.
【答案】with/in embarrassment
9. 'I've passed all my exams', he announced ________________（满意地）.
【答案】with/in satisfaction
10. Gillian and Darren greeted the speakers ________________（热情地）.
【答案】with great enthusiasm
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11. Desmond eyed her anguished face ________________（同情地）.
【答案】with sympathy
12. In fog you should drive ________________（特别小心地）.
【答案】with extreme caution; with great care
13. I look ________________（羡慕地） on those lucky people with big families.
【答案】with envy
14. The kids were screaming ________________（高兴地）.
【答案】with/in delight；with joy
15. He looked at me ________________（困惑地） and did not answer the question.
【答案】in confusion/puzzlement
16. The whole ceremony took place ________________（寂静无声地）.
【答案】in complete silence
17. 'It's a lie!' he shouted ________________（愤怒地）.
【答案】in anger
18. They accepted the decision ________________（伤心地）.
【答案】with sadness
19. She clapped her hands ________________（激动地）.
【答案】with/in excitement
20. He stared at the animal ________________（吃惊地）.
【答案】in amazement; with/in surprise
21. Sam threw his books down ________________（厌恶地） and stormed out of the room.
【答案】with/in disgust
22. He watched ________________（如释重负地）as the girl nodded.
【答案】with/in relief
23. Daniel gazed at her ________________（仰慕地；钦佩地）.
【答案】with/in admiration
24. She looked round ________________（震惊地）, unwilling to believe what she had seen.
【答案】in shock
25. The meeting was held ________________（秘密地）.
【答案】in secret
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26. He had something to deal with, so he had to leave ________________（匆忙地）.
【答案】in a hurry
27. He ran away ________________（害怕地）.
【答案】in fear/panic/terror/horror
28. His face was white ________________（因为害怕）.
【答案】with fear
29. He had to leave his hometown ________________（非常伤心地）.
【答案】with sorrow 三、实战演练
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was a warm and sunny morning at the Central Park Zoo. Abigail and her classmates were abuzz with excitement as their school bus entered the zoo park lot. Today, Abigail’s class was going on a field trip to the zoo to learn more about the animals and their natural habitats.
“Before you leave the bus, please make sure you have your buddy！” Mrs. Brown announced. To make sure no one got lost in the zoo, each student had a buddy (companion/friend). Abigail’s buddy was named Derrick. Derrick loves animals and was also excited to go to the zoo. But sometimes, Derrick does not follow the rules and gets in trouble. Abigail hoped that today, Derrick would follow the rules so they would not get in trouble.
While the rest of the students got off the bus, Abigail and Derrick quickly ran off to explore. They found the exhibits for many different kinds of animals and learned a lot about their natural habitats. They saw the elephants playing and they saw giraffes eating. They saw the polar bears sleeping and the monkeys leaping. Abigail asked Derrick：
“Derrick, what is your favorite animal？”
“I think I like chimpanzees best. They have a lot of energy, just like me! What animal do you like, Abigail？”
“I love polar bears! I think their lifestyle in the Arctic is very interesting.” A few hours later, Abigail and Derrick started to feel hungry. They made their way back to the zoo entrance to eat lunch at the Rainforest Cafe. The Rainforest Cafe is both Abigail and Derrick’s favorite restaurant because there is an aquarium inside. The restaurant is also famous for its chocolate cake, which Abigail ordered for dessert after they had finished their lunch.
As Abigail was finishing her cake, Derrick excused himself to go to the restroom. About ten minutes later, a sudden alarm began to go off and a voice came over the loudspeaker.
“Attention! Someone has opened the chimpanzee exhibit! Some chimpanzees have escaped！”
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People were screaming and starting to run. Abigail looked for Derrick, but he was nowhere to be found.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1：
As more and more people ran out of the zoo, Abigail began to think __________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2：
As Abigail raced up the path to the animal exhibits, she was stopped _________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________ 【One possible version】： Paragraph 1：
As more and more people ran out of the zoo, Abigail began to think where her buddy,_Derrick,
could be. She got up from the table quickly and circled back to the restrooms, calling Derrick’s name. There was no answer, so Abigail left the restaurant. As she looked around the zoo grounds, she remembered that Derrick had a lot of energy and had told her that chimpanzees were his favorite animals. Derrick wouldn’t have left the restaurant to release the chimpanzees，would he? Oh no! In shock Abigail was sure she knew where Derrick had gone. Paragraph 2：
As Abigail raced up the path to the animal exhibits, she was stopped in her tracks by none
other than Derrick himself, with two chimpanzees cradled in his arms. He offered a small, guilty smile. “I didn’t mean to let them escape,” he began. “I just wanted to take them out to play for a little while! I took the key from a zookeeper who wasn’t looking. But then, the lock broke and...” Behind Abigail, Mrs. Brown had begun to walk up the path and saw Derrick holding the animals with excitement. It was clear from her stern expression that he was in big trouble because he didn’t follow the rules．
【点评】：故事情节完整紧凑合理，叙述流畅，句式结构丰富，介词短语的运用更好地描写了角色的情感。文中in shock 体现了Abigail 一想到Derrick 很可能把chimpanzees放了出来时的震惊之情。with excitement 则体现了Derrick怀抱喜爱动物时的兴奋之情。
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专题08 读后续写句式提升之独立结构的使用
独立主格结构是由“名词或代词+现在分词、过去分词、不定式、形容词短语、名词短语、介词短语或副词短语”构成的一种独立结构。在该结构中，名词或代词与其后的部分构成逻辑上的主谓关系，用来修饰谓语动词或整个句子。在句中作状语，表示 “时间、条件、原因、伴随，方式或结果”等含义，其位置比较灵活，可放于句首、句中或句末。 一、请仔细观察下列句子中独立结构的作用 1. 名词（代词）+ 现在分词
The clock striking twelve, I went to bed. （表原因） 2. 名词（代词）+ 过去分词
He lay there on his back, his teeth set, his right hand clenched on his breast. （表伴随） 3. 名词（代词）+ 形容词短语
Her face pale with anger, she rose to go away. （表原因） 4. 名词（代词）+ 介词短语
Then, last night, I followed him here and climbed in, sword in hand. （表方式） 5. 名词（代词）+ 副词短语
Summer over, the students returned to school. （表原因） 二、请使用独立结构改写下列句子
1. Her eyes brimmed with tears and she left. 【答案】(Her) eyes brimming with tears, she left.
2. The boy stood there and his face was rigid with anger. 【答案】The boy stood there, his face rigid with anger.
3. I clasped my hands behind me and I was too shocked to say a word. 【答案】I was too shocked to say a word, my hands clasped behind me. 4. A girl came in with a book in her hand. 【答案】A girl came in, book in hand.
5. The manager sat quietly in the office and his eyes were closed. 【答案】The manager sat quietly in the office, (his ) eyes closed. 6. They sat in the room with the curtains drawn.
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【答案】They sat in the room, the curtains drawn.
7. Oliver jumped up and his face was bright red with anger. 【答案】His face bright red with anger, Oliver jumped up. 8. Linda leapt to her feet and her eyes was blazing with anger. 【答案】Linda leapt to her feet, her eyes blazing with anger.
9. As we hugged Ruth good-bye, she said to me. Her tears was shining in her eyes. 【答案】As we hugged Ruth good-bye, she said to me, tears shining in her eyes. 10. He cried and his blue eyes was shining behind his glasses. 【答案】He cried, his blue eyes shining behind his glasses. 三、实战演练（2018年6月浙江高考）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. \"The day starts at dawn on my farm,\" he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens. while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a hose ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. \"Don’t be late for supper,\" Uncle Paul cried, \"and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!\" \"OK! \" my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his fam house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的）blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
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注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语： 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. ___________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ We had no idea where we were and it got dark.___________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. My horse reared into the air, let out a frightened whinny, and galloped off the track. I held on for dear life, branches lashing into my arms and face. Finally he slowed down, then stopped, but looking around at the endless sea of trees, I knew we had gotten hopelessly lost. I called and the only answer was the rustling of the wind in the trees. The horse meandered through the lonesome pines, with me continuing to call and scan the horizon for a familiar landmark, ears pricked for the sound of a horse or a human voice.
We had no idea where we were and it got dark. At last I heard the welcome sound of rushing water -- the river! Gratefully we went to the bank and drank our fill. We followed it in the direction that the sun had set, and eventually heard the familiar frogs, and saw the comforting sight of the old farm house, my dad shining a huge lamp from the porch, guiding our way home.
【点评】独立结构是英语语言表达中的一种高级形式，也是高中生英语学习中的一个难点。在这篇文章中，作者熟练地使用独立结构进行辅助描写，使故事的表达更加出彩。
专题10 读后续写高分技巧综合训练
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一、请运用所学技巧翻译下面的段落。
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Jim 看到袭击者逃进了黑暗中，他想到了那个姑娘。Jim 仍然喘着粗气，朝着她走去。那姑娘坐在灌木丛后面哭着。尽管Jim在黑暗中几乎看不清那姑娘，他还是能确定地感觉到她惊魂未定。Jim不想再吓着她，他隔开一定距离和她说话。Jim轻轻地告诉她袭击者已经逃跑了，她安全了。姑娘许久没说话，接着他吃惊地听到姑娘问道：“是你吗，爸爸？” 【参考范文】
Seeing the attacker flee/disappear/run into the darkness, Jim thought of the girl. Still breathing heavily, Jim walked towards her. The girl was sitting behind the bushes, sobbing. Although in the darkness Jim could hardly see the girl clearly, he could sense her trembling alarm with certainty. To avoid frightening the girl further, Jim spoke to her at a distance. In a soft voice, Jim told her that the attacker had run away and that she was safe. There was a long silence and then in astonishment he heard the girl ask, “Dad, is that you?”
【点评】这篇短文用到了前面学过的Ving、副词和介词短语，丰富了表达形式，使情感描写和动作描写更加细腻生动。
（二）
第二天，Meg去跟Mrs.Gilson 解释了她为什么不交回家作业。为了不让同学知道这件事，她趁没人注意时悄悄地溜进了Mrs. Gilson的办公室。Meg低着头，她告诉了Mrs.Gilson她的回家作业找不到了。“我保证我完成了回家作业。。。。。。”她解释道，眼里含着泪。见此情景，Mrs. Gilson 打断了她。她笑着告诉Meg她已经在上一天把她的作业和试卷一起交起来了。她知道Meg不会因为偷懒而说谎。听到Mrs.Gilson的话，Meg 如释重负。她开心地笑了，眼里的泪水落了下来。 【参考范文】
The next day, Meg went to tell Mrs. Gilson why she couldn’t hand in her homework. To avoid being known by her classmates, she secretly slid into Mrs. Gilson’s office without being noticed. Her head drooped, Meg told Mrs. Gilson the truth that she just could not find her homework. “I promise that I did finish my homework and…” she explained, tears welling up in her eyes/ eyes brimming with tears. Seeing this, Mrs. Gilson interrupted her. With a smile, she told Meg that she had handed in her homework with her paper the day before. She knew Meg was not lying because of laziness. Hearing this, Meg felt a surge of relief. She smiled brightly, drops of tears rolling down her cheeks.
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【点评】这篇短文用到了前面学过的Ving、副词、介词短语、情绪表达和独立结构，尤其是独立结构。文中三处使用了独立结构，生动细腻地描写了Meg的情感变化。
二、阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
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From the first day he entered my classroom, Willard P. Frank existed in his own world, shutting out his classmates and me. My attempts at building a friendly relationship with him were met with complete indifference. I could see that his classmates fared no better. Willard was strictly a loner who seemed to have no desire or need to break his silence．
Shortly after the Thanksgiving holiday, we received word of the annual Christmas collection of money for the less fortunate people in our school district.
“Christmas is a season of giving，”I told my students. “There are a few students in the school who might not have a happy holiday season. By contributing to our Christmas collection, you will help buy food, clothing and toys for these needy people. We will start the collection tomorrow.”
When I called for the contributions the next day, I discovered that almost everyone had forgotten except for Willard P. Frank. The boy dug deep into his pants pockets as he walked slowly to my desk. Carefully, he dropped two quarters into the small container.
“I don’t need milk for lunch，” he mumbled. For a moment, just a moment, he smiled. Then he turned and walked back to his desk.
That night, after school, I took our few contributions to the school principal. I couldn’t help sharing the incident that had taken place.
“I may be wrong, but I believe Willard might be getting ready to become a part of the world around him,” I told the principal.
“Yes.” he nodded.“And we might do well to have him share a bit of his world with us. I just received a list of the poor families in our school who most need help through the Christmas collection. Here, take a look at it.”
As I gazed down to read, I discovered Willard P. Frank and his family were the top names on the list. Seeing this, I decided to do something for him．
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Paragraph 1：
On that Sunday, I paid a visit to Willard’s family._________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2:
The next day, I had a special class for Willard.___________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Paragraph 1：
On that Sunday, I paid a visit to Willard’s family. On entering his house, I was surprised to find a barely empty room with only a broken bed and a dirty second hand sofa. Willard told me that his mother died a few years ago and that his father was missing, leaving him to live with a sick grandma. When asked why he had given the two quarters,_Willard mumbled,_“There are people poorer than me, so I just want to do some help by contributing my milk money.” Hearing his words, I couldn’t help bursting into tears. I thought I should help him break his silence. Paragraph 2：
The next day, I had a special class for Willard. I shared his story with the whole class and
said, “Now, on behalf of the people in need, I should say thank you Willard, you are great！” After a silence, all the students clapped, saying, “Willard, you are great! Willard, you are great！” and they walked slowly to him and hugged him tightly. A friendly relationship was built and Willard’s silence was broken by a smile on his face.
【点评】故事内容连贯，情节感人，与所给材料前后呼应，自成一体。表达形式丰富，能熟练使用现在分词和过去分词。
B
A friend of mine, named Jack, received an expensive car from his brother as a Christmas present. On Christmas Eve when Jack came out of his office, a street urchin(顽童)was walking around the shining car. “Is this your car, sir?” He asked. Jack answered, “Yes, my brother gave it to me for Christmas.” The boy was surprised. “You mean your brother gave it to you and it did cost you nothing? Sir, I wish…”He hesitated. Jack thought of course he knew what the boy wanted, but what the boy said surprised him greatly. “I wish,” the boy went on, “that I could be a brother like that.” Jack looked at the boy in surprise, and then he said again, “Would you like
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to take a ride in my car?” “Oh yes, I’d love to,” the boy answered.
After a short ride, the boy turned and with his eyes shining, said, “Sir, would you mind driving in front of my house?”
Jack smiled a little. He thought he knew what the boy wanted. He wanted to show his neighbors that he could ride home in a big car. But Jack was wrong again. “Will you stop where those two steps are?” The boy asked. 注意：
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好； 4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1
He got out and ran up to the steps. _________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2
Jack got out and lifted the boy to the front seat of his car. _________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Paragraph 1：
He got out and ran up to the steps. Then in a short while Jack heard him coming back, but
he was not coming fast. He was carrying his little crippled(残疾的) brother. Then he Cheerfully sat down on the step, pointing to the car. “There he is, Buddy, just like I told you upstairs. His brother gave it to him for Christmas and it didn’t cost him a cent. And some day I’m going to give you one just like it…then you can see for yourself all the nice things in the Christmas windows that I’ve been trying to tell you about.” Paragraph 2：
Jack got out and lifted the boy to the front seat of his car. The shining-eyed elder brother
climbed in beside him and the three began an unforgettable holiday ride, looking at all those beautiful things. That Christmas Eve, Jack learned the real meaning of the words: “It’s more blessed to give than to receive.” He also learned what it means to be “an elder brother like
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that.”
【点评】故事流畅，情节充满正能量，与所给材料首尾呼应，构思巧妙，结尾出乎意料。词汇丰富，句式多样，表达准确。
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