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Hello, class, it is an honor to introduce myself to everyone. I am XXX years old. I come from XXX City. I am a little fat, but honest and friendly. I study very hard and do well in all subjects. I can get along well with the classmates and I am always ready to help others. I am popular among the students. I have a great many hobbies, such as pop music and sports activities. I am good at playing basketball. What’s more, I will make up my mind to learn from everyone.
试题分析:本文属于提纲类短文,要求用英语把自己介绍给全班同学,文章的要点都已经给出了。写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文,一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】这篇范文有一些常见的短语和词组:do well in在…方面做的好,get along with相处,be ready to准备好的,be popular among sb受…欢迎,.be good at doing擅长,. make up one’s mind to do决定做…。还有一些句式:it is an honor to introduce myself to everyone.这是it做形式主语的句子,I can get along well with the classmates and I am always ready to help others. 这句话是并列句, What’s more,